The vermilion sky melted and slipped
into a barely muddied, ruddy hillside
powdered-sugarcoated, vanilla ice-whipped
The vivacious glory-of-the-snow
sabotages the dead silence of the season
with its vehement, blue-violet glow
Know that I see the gleaming aurora in
your laugh lines, life lines
in the palms of your hands and
pads of your feet, unfurling the unsaid
The north star becomes
a cardinal bindi on your forehead
Know that I feel you are heaven-defined
prophecies pressed into my spine
You want to whisper across my tips and capillaries
breathe in sky-blue butterflies, out sea-green envy
I want to compass through your crust and marrow
with every very ounce of streaming sanguine in me
To keep burning bridges and breaking-off roads
marooning our mauve mere of melancholy
To reclaim yourself under new wintry dawn odes
finally, fathoming the worth of the word, 'free'
The vermilion sky melted and slipped
into a half-baked, chocolate hillside
asleep in sleet, numbed and tight-lipped
That alone ensnared me. I'm weird that way.
A beautiful dance of lovely visions. Brava.
Thank you so very kindly for taking the time to read and comment on my work, dearest!
You are far too lovely!
breathe in sky-blue butterflies, out sea-green envy
I want to compass through your crust and marrow
with every very ounce of streaming sanguine in me
To keep burning bridges and breaking-off roads
marooning our mauve mere of melancholy
To reclaim yourself under new wintry dawn odes
finally, fathoming the worth of the word, 'free' "
I love the imagery of this piece! The first and last stanzas were delicious and the ones in between are astonishing!
Nothing can make me happier than knowing my work was able to touch another beautiful being!
finally, fathoming the worth of the word, 'free'"
Mighty words...strengthening....a couplet that imparts the feelings of hope, joy, and perhaps budding love....beautiful piece!
Thank you so much, darling, for taking the time to read and comment on my work, I truly appreciate it!