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Literature Text
Dear aurorean wraiths of past mistakes
release man from your unliving remains
cast him out of your silhouette heartaches
Overmorrows are stained with past champagnes
drunk on a once implacable fervor
amassing populace from all terrains
Eros is a cantankerous server
of all who fall into his mondegreens
while Venus keeps track like an observer
Love's veiled in cashmere curtains and smoke screens
lost in childish charades of sweet sixteens
NAPOWRIMO DAY 19 
See also Sammur-amat's Special Slice of NaPoWriMo Pie
A Terza Rima
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I WOULD SUPER LOVE TO SEE COMMENTS, THANK YOU!!
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Critique:
Which line did you like the least?
Which line did you like the most?
Two-cents please?
See also Sammur-amat's Special Slice of NaPoWriMo Pie
A Terza Rima
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I WOULD SUPER LOVE TO SEE COMMENTS, THANK YOU!!
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Critique:
Which line did you like the least?
Which line did you like the most?
Two-cents please?
© 2013 - 2024 Sammur-amat
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"Love's veiled in cashmere curtains and smoke screens
lost in childish charades of sweet sixteens"
I love that line the most, but the whole poem is wonderful. (But you knew I would love it. It's mythological and it's written by your lovely self!)
lost in childish charades of sweet sixteens"
I love that line the most, but the whole poem is wonderful. (But you knew I would love it. It's mythological and it's written by your lovely self!)