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Find if you can the land where fairies dwell
What a sight to see the ethereal
To plop on lily pads, dream on bluebells
Magic and mischief are what they impel
Periwinkle eyes and lips of coral
Find if you can the land where fairies dwell
Cold iron they fear, their charms it expels
Pay'em in cream and butter, their ideal
To plop on lily pads, dream on bluebells
Through changeling babies our homes they indwell
For they are creatures so fantastical
Find if you can the land where fairies dwell
Butterfly-winged as the legends foretell
Fairies live to serve the queen imperial
To plop on lily pads, dream on bluebells
If just to fool lovers with fairy spells
And taste a night's malice quite magical
Find if you can the land where fairies dwell
To plop on lily pads, dream on bluebells
What a sight to see the ethereal
To plop on lily pads, dream on bluebells
Magic and mischief are what they impel
Periwinkle eyes and lips of coral
Find if you can the land where fairies dwell
Cold iron they fear, their charms it expels
Pay'em in cream and butter, their ideal
To plop on lily pads, dream on bluebells
Through changeling babies our homes they indwell
For they are creatures so fantastical
Find if you can the land where fairies dwell
Butterfly-winged as the legends foretell
Fairies live to serve the queen imperial
To plop on lily pads, dream on bluebells
If just to fool lovers with fairy spells
And taste a night's malice quite magical
Find if you can the land where fairies dwell
To plop on lily pads, dream on bluebells
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NAPOWRIMO#11
I hope you guys enjoy the read,
do tell me what you think
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Critiques:
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NAPOWRIMO#11
I hope you guys enjoy the read,
do tell me what you think
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I WOULD SUPER LOVE TO SEE COMMENTS, THANK YOU!!
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Critiques:
Which line did you like the least?
Which line did you like the most?
Was there real impact at any instance?
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I love these lines:
"To plop on lily pads, dream on bluebells"
"Pay'em in cream and butter, their ideal" (that made me smile)
"And taste a night's malice quite magical"
Now, I need you to understand something: ANY time I see the words "fairy/fairies," "wizard," "sorcerer," "dragon," or "magic" my eyes usually glaze over and I lose immediate (and I do mean immediate) interest in the piece of writing. But you, my dear, kept me entertained and held my attention through my apparent anti-fantasy psychological block. That's a huge compliment coming from me.
"To plop on lily pads, dream on bluebells"
"Pay'em in cream and butter, their ideal" (that made me smile)
"And taste a night's malice quite magical"
Now, I need you to understand something: ANY time I see the words "fairy/fairies," "wizard," "sorcerer," "dragon," or "magic" my eyes usually glaze over and I lose immediate (and I do mean immediate) interest in the piece of writing. But you, my dear, kept me entertained and held my attention through my apparent anti-fantasy psychological block. That's a huge compliment coming from me.