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"Please be careful when handling" is what the attached card with the delicate cursive says.
The card continues to explain that it is easily breakable or in other words,
FRAGILE
(underlined neatly twice).
Yes,
I wrote that note, and with the special way I curve my h, you must have already figured.
Yes,
this is me talking about the bow-tied with polka-dots and carded heart that is in your hands.
Yes,
it's mine and it's from me to you- and yes
again
and again,
you're mangling the life out of me with your melancholic, beautiful blue claw-like fingertips.
The card continues to explain that it is easily breakable or in other words,
FRAGILE
(underlined neatly twice).
Yes,
I wrote that note, and with the special way I curve my h, you must have already figured.
Yes,
this is me talking about the bow-tied with polka-dots and carded heart that is in your hands.
Yes,
it's mine and it's from me to you- and yes
again
and again,
you're mangling the life out of me with your melancholic, beautiful blue claw-like fingertips.
How frivolously you cripple my heart with your bare hands. How easily you simply soap yourself clean of the bloody aftermath-- corpses could fear the coldness of your festering heart.
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As I was expecting, very elaborate, delicate and alluring - it's just like you. Sometimes (quite often, really) you make me jealous.... 