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To describe my passion for picking letters
Shan't grant me absolution from their fetters
My bile is the crumbling tower of babel
My bite beguiles- you listen to my babble
Some souls are like spindles that have senses sown
Others are quilts of burnt lungs and finger bones
NAPOWRIMO DAY 7 
See also Sammur-amat's Special Slice of NaPoWriMo Pie
Mathnawi is an Arabic/Persian form poetry which
basically consists of 11-syllable versed in pairs aka couplets.
There is no limit to the number of couplets in a Mathnawi.
It has a rhyme scheme of
a. a.. b. b.. c. c., etc.
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I WOULD SUPER LOVE TO SEE COMMENTS, THANK YOU!!
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Critique:
Which line did you like the least?
Which line did you like the most?
Two-cents please?
See also Sammur-amat's Special Slice of NaPoWriMo Pie
Mathnawi is an Arabic/Persian form poetry which
basically consists of 11-syllable versed in pairs aka couplets.
There is no limit to the number of couplets in a Mathnawi.
It has a rhyme scheme of
a. a.. b. b.. c. c., etc.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------
I WOULD SUPER LOVE TO SEE COMMENTS, THANK YOU!!
----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Critique:
Which line did you like the least?
Which line did you like the most?
Two-cents please?
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Comments10
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This is great 
my favorite line would have to be 'My bile is the crumbling tower of babel' it just feels 'right' to say that line aloud. Again fantastic work.
my favorite line would have to be 'My bile is the crumbling tower of babel' it just feels 'right' to say that line aloud. Again fantastic work.