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Sometimes, when it's tranquil and I get to p o n d e r
I begin to fathom we're made for each o t h e r;
I know that God plumped up my chest and its c o n t e n t
to safeguard your worn out bones from curling o v e r.
Laced, our hands trace shadows under mint moon's c r e s c e n t;
we are lost causes and divulged dances o u t s p e n t.
I know my skin is downy as opposed to y o u r s
for you to take shelter under my winged s e g m e n t.
Still, understand that you're the reason I can s o a r,
accept that we're a pastiche of paramour c o r e s.
I'm the answer to your unspoken l i t a n y;
Surely, you're my inglenook and my lifeboat's o a r s.
I begin to fathom we're made for each o t h e r;
I know that God plumped up my chest and its c o n t e n t
to safeguard your worn out bones from curling o v e r.
Laced, our hands trace shadows under mint moon's c r e s c e n t;
we are lost causes and divulged dances o u t s p e n t.
I know my skin is downy as opposed to y o u r s
for you to take shelter under my winged s e g m e n t.
Still, understand that you're the reason I can s o a r,
accept that we're a pastiche of paramour c o r e s.
I'm the answer to your unspoken l i t a n y;
Surely, you're my inglenook and my lifeboat's o a r s.
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Rubaiyat is an Arabic/Persian form of fixed poetry consisting of
quatrains (4-line stanzas) where
lines one, two, and four rhyme and the third line
can be used to interlock the next stanza by
doing so with three or more stanzas.
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Critique:
Which line did you like the least?
Which line did you like the most?
Two-cents please?
See also Sammur-amat's Special Slice of NaPoWriMo Pie
Rubaiyat is an Arabic/Persian form of fixed poetry consisting of
quatrains (4-line stanzas) where
lines one, two, and four rhyme and the third line
can be used to interlock the next stanza by
doing so with three or more stanzas.
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I WOULD SUPER LOVE TO SEE COMMENTS, THANK YOU!!
----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Critique:
Which line did you like the least?
Which line did you like the most?
Two-cents please?
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These are amazing! I was trying to pick a fav stanza but they are all incredible!
Laced, our hands trace shadows under mint moon's c r e s c e n t;
This one floored me
Laced, our hands trace shadows under mint moon's c r e s c e n t;
This one floored me