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I lace my skin up like a corset, peel back the blinds on my eyelids, and take a step forward, waking from the poppies to the
lightning bug glow of truth tapping on my eardrums.
In front of the mirror I stand, but what I notice is not the awkward crook of my nose or butterfly lashes. I look into the lighted mirror as if searching for answers hidden under
Ribbon-like sets of
veins, arteries and nerves.
Sometimes it all flows correctly; sometimes everything becomes
knotted up in all the wrong places. Skin toughened by beatings brought about by the
harsh world
around me. Yet it is the same skin that is softened by the warm touch of friendship and family.
An under-achieving mind, wandering and corroding in my daydreams of true love, the pursuit of happiness, and hopeless wishes to save the waking world.
An overworked heart, squeezing out far too many bloodied tears; it has been
patched up and reworked more than any first-time quilt makers' handiwork.
An erratic soul, constantly withering and being brought back to life at the mercy of lies and truth.
It's sad when your world is nothing but fabric & when you open your eyes you're just lost in the sent-spinning moon. I'll
close them
for a while until the particles align and the air doesn't feel so false. I hear honesty from bones and fingernails and the hairs on my arms, I hear truth in newborn babies that bubble staccatos and legatos,
And so I hope that we were not made for deceit.
And for once I'm starting to trust myself.
We live in a cosmos where it can never be about only you and me or just you or just me:
This erratic, chaotic, anaerobic, revolving oblate spheroid is home to even more
sand-spec existences
than we could ever care to know about.
I'll live with nimbus sparse between my toes, ballads of being resonating through
my ribs, and hope
grounded in the crowns of my teeth.
lightning bug glow of truth tapping on my eardrums.
In front of the mirror I stand, but what I notice is not the awkward crook of my nose or butterfly lashes. I look into the lighted mirror as if searching for answers hidden under
Ribbon-like sets of
veins, arteries and nerves.
Sometimes it all flows correctly; sometimes everything becomes
knotted up in all the wrong places. Skin toughened by beatings brought about by the
harsh world
around me. Yet it is the same skin that is softened by the warm touch of friendship and family.
An under-achieving mind, wandering and corroding in my daydreams of true love, the pursuit of happiness, and hopeless wishes to save the waking world.
An overworked heart, squeezing out far too many bloodied tears; it has been
patched up and reworked more than any first-time quilt makers' handiwork.
An erratic soul, constantly withering and being brought back to life at the mercy of lies and truth.
It's sad when your world is nothing but fabric & when you open your eyes you're just lost in the sent-spinning moon. I'll
close them
for a while until the particles align and the air doesn't feel so false. I hear honesty from bones and fingernails and the hairs on my arms, I hear truth in newborn babies that bubble staccatos and legatos,
And so I hope that we were not made for deceit.
And for once I'm starting to trust myself.
We live in a cosmos where it can never be about only you and me or just you or just me:
This erratic, chaotic, anaerobic, revolving oblate spheroid is home to even more
sand-spec existences
than we could ever care to know about.
I'll live with nimbus sparse between my toes, ballads of being resonating through
my ribs, and hope
grounded in the crowns of my teeth.
Literature
Lightning Bug Cosmos
I lace my skin up like a corset, peel back the blinds on my eyelids, and take a step forward, waking from the poppies to the
lightning bug glow of truth tapping on my eardrums.
In front of the mirror I stand, but what I notice is not the awkward crook of my nose or butterfly lashes. I look into the lighted mirror as if searching for answers hidden under
Ribbon-like sets of
veins, arteries and nerves.
Sometimes it all flows correctly; sometimes everything becomes
knotted up in all the wrong places. Skin toughened by beatings brought about by the
Literature
Let Me Down Gently
I never said I was an angel,
rather,
I'm a feather on its wing,
so when you let me drift
on the next western current,
let me fall slowly down,
d
r
i
f
t
i
n
g.
I promise I'll land softly,
though you will not find me
where you left me.
Literature
Moth wings
With no alarm
she dances through the bony air,
eyes like a hungry child
slobbering at the first scent of knowledge.
Glistening off of those eyes–
the very sight of it–
the taste that all greedy minds crave.
She flutters towards it,
light peaks through her delicate wings
like how it flickers under the water's surface,
an angel ascending into heaven
easily and swiftly crushed
by the capital hand
that shadowed behind such heavenly light–
with all intention of crushing the wings of innocence –
and with a clear conscience,
as a moth is to a hand as what a person is to the universe.
Isn't it painless for a hand to swat fo
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I WOULD SUPER LOVE TO SEE COMMENTS, THANK YOU!!
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Critiques:
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Which lines did you like the most?
What do you think of the flow?
Was the poem too lengthy or too short or just right?
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This is amazing. I love the imagery in the piece.