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I want to be
that
stale as bread,
peeling
picture of her
that you
stow(ed) away
in the beating
of your breast
pocket
and the
strong rattling
of my bones;
you can be
the invisible ink
stains
on his
(un)forgotten shirt
that still reeks
of betrayal
in the form
of another
floral perfume
and the
soft buzzing
in your head.
we are similar-
sick
hoarders
of the
worst kind.
that
stale as bread,
peeling
picture of her
that you
stow(ed) away
in the beating
of your breast
and the
strong rattling
of my bones;
you can be
the invisible ink
stains
on his
(un)forgotten shirt
that still reeks
of betrayal
in the form
of another
floral perfume
and the
soft buzzing
in your head.
we are similar-
sick
hoarders
of the
worst kind.
Literature
Pack-a-day
A diamond queen
and seventeen,
smoking pack-a-day dreams
for 95 cents more than
zirconium-falls in slim nicotine
(but the cancer in ashtrays never
stops anyone from trying.)
There’s truth in gusts of sleep,
while I struggle in the
security of windbreaking
as heaven opens up to scream.
Literature
demigods
i set my
red skull ablaze,
detached from my
mercury head
like a king
of blue smoke &
stelliform girls
with shuddering
shoreline ribs
Literature
Winter's Words
"Be my autumn,"
she was whispering
when her eyes found you
tracing in the dust
of ethereal dreams.
If only she knew...
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I swear, Dee, I wish I could be eloquent and tell you exactly why I love your words--but suffice it to say that I do.