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My darling,
If I had to color you
from the buzzing of your irises
to your footprints in the sand
You would be deeper
than liquid gold
though
just as intoxicating as
oil of musk and tea rose
You are possibly the amulet
that has captured the monarch
nymphet in me
I wonder if you will use your sap
to strangle me
Or will it be in adoration
that you will come in the night
to leave me wet-lipped with a kiss
from your creeping buttercup lips?
If I had to color you
from the buzzing of your irises
to your footprints in the sand
You would be deeper
than liquid gold
though
just as intoxicating as
oil of musk and tea rose
You are possibly the amulet
that has captured the monarch
nymphet in me
I wonder if you will use your sap
to strangle me
Or will it be in adoration
that you will come in the night
to leave me wet-lipped with a kiss
from your creeping buttercup lips?
Free Verse 
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Written for Lissomer 's Micro Color Contest!
You can check out the details over here:
This is my second entry, with chosen color AMBER
Link to my fist entry: Kintsurukoi: A Rensaku
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I WOULD SUPER LOVE TO SEE COMMENTS, THANK YOU!!
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Critique:
Which line did you like the least?
Which line did you like the most?
Two-cents please?
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Written for Lissomer 's Micro Color Contest!
You can check out the details over here:
One week left! Micro Colour Contest!ONLY 7 DAYS TO GO, LOVELIES
That is literally the only point of this update. Keep your entries coming! I've read some truly amazing ones and I can't wait to start judging!
THE VERY LAST PRIZE UPDATE:
Okay, after getting a ridiculous(ly wonderful) number of incredible prize donations, I'm finally calling it quits; I don't need any more donations from you lovely lovely people! Thank you so so so much to everyone who's donated points, features, poems, llamas, etcetera;
I am completely overwhelmed by your generousity and support.
So, one last time, go down and check out the freshly pimped prize list!
GUEST JUDGE ANNOUNCEMENT:
Okay, so this is a pretty cool update. Instead of just me staring blankly at all of your incredible entries and having NO IDEA who to pick, I'm bringing in the big guns!
Please welcome the incomparable chromeantennae,
who is joining me as a Special Guest Judge!
This is my second entry, with chosen color AMBER
Link to my fist entry: Kintsurukoi: A Rensaku
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I WOULD SUPER LOVE TO SEE COMMENTS, THANK YOU!!
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Critique:
Which line did you like the least?
Which line did you like the most?
Two-cents please?
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I love the flow of this, great job