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i.

snowflake child, you are a fine example
of the incandescence of a human light

even under innumerable umbras
i see you- ruby and blooming

ferociously fighting your way
out of a pile of rubble



ii.

my anemone, my halo
that comely wraps around my moon pith

do not fret if i self-stumble, fumble
with my fingers, and mumble to my toes

my center of gravity is oft frail and
meek to begin with



iii.

you are lead cause of the diamond flecks
scattering about the carbon of my pupils

you do not leave me
you teach me to be

snake-eyed yet shotgun-hearted-
a sapphire wanderlust livid

for life and star-gazing sights, you map
constellations on my freckles and fright  



iv.

look now at how i'll find my lighthouse lover
then tend to some kids

and grow out of my gills and into grey hairs
then tend to some kids with their own kids

and reminisce about friends and phenomena
i signed my name on a patch of sky with

all on my own except
that your hand never left mine

that if i were to crumble
like the sandcastle i am

i only need to lean back fearlessly, trusting
to find your spine resting there all the while



v.

if they ask me, i'll tell them you are all
colors, for you are an irrevocable white
Happy Birthday
to a friend I wish I could truly
walk together hand-in-hand with
`IrrevocableFate :love:

Thank you for being the best and most
brilliant treasure trove that you are :heart:

PS
I love you quite an awful lot :tighthug:
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:iconadagiobunny:
Adagiobunny Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Student Writer
what a gorgeous mass of images! you captivate me from the power of the first stanza until the end... :heart:
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014   General Artist
thank you so very much for such a heart warming comment, dear heart :blowkiss:
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:iconadagiobunny:
Adagiobunny Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
glad i could put a smile on your face! :hug:
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:iconfuzzyhoser:
FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Really lovely, dear. :heart:
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014   General Artist
thank you infinitely, loveliest lady :tighthug: 
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DeriveAnemone Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Brilliant! Heart I love the line 'even under innumerable umbras I see you - ruby and blooming'.
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014   General Artist
awwh, thank you! :blush: :heart:
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:iconlady-yume:
Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013   Writer
Dee-love, a belated congrats on that well-deserved DD! I can't believe I didn't know this one yet - it's absolutely gorgeous! :heart: :clap:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014   General Artist

kimmy-love! :tighthug:

i only recently found out that this had received a dd myself, i am both ecstatic and humbled. :love:

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:iconlady-yume:
Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014   Writer
Dee-chan~! :heart:
So wonderful to see your pretty face around here again - and yes, be so happy about that DD! You so deserved it :heart:
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