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i.

snowflake child, you are a fine example
of the incandescence of a human light

even under innumerable umbras
i see you- ruby and blooming

ferociously fighting your way
out of a pile of rubble



ii.

my anemone, my halo
that comely wraps around my moon pith

do not fret if i self-stumble, fumble
with my fingers, and mumble to my toes

my center of gravity is oft frail and
meek to begin with



iii.

you are lead cause of the diamond flecks
scattering about the carbon of my pupils

you do not leave me
you teach me to be

snake-eyed yet shotgun-hearted-
a sapphire wanderlust livid

for life and star-gazing sights, you map
constellations on my freckles and fright  



iv.

look now at how i'll find my lighthouse lover
then tend to some kids

and grow out of my gills and into grey hairs
then tend to some kids with their own kids

and reminisce about friends and phenomena
i signed my name on a patch of sky with

all on my own except
that your hand never left mine

that if i were to crumble
like the sandcastle i am

i only need to lean back fearlessly, trusting
to find your spine resting there all the while



v.

if they ask me, i'll tell them you are all
colors, for you are an irrevocable white
Happy Birthday
to a friend I wish I could truly
walk together hand-in-hand with
`IrrevocableFate :love:

Thank you for being the best and most
brilliant treasure trove that you are :heart:

PS
I love you quite an awful lot :tighthug:
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:iconadagiobunny:
Adagiobunny Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Student Writer
what a gorgeous mass of images! you captivate me from the power of the first stanza until the end... :heart:
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014   General Artist
thank you so very much for such a heart warming comment, dear heart :blowkiss:
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:iconadagiobunny:
Adagiobunny Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
glad i could put a smile on your face! :hug:
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:iconfuzzyhoser:
FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Really lovely, dear. :heart:
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014   General Artist
thank you infinitely, loveliest lady :tighthug: 
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DeriveAnemone Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Brilliant! Heart I love the line 'even under innumerable umbras I see you - ruby and blooming'.
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014   General Artist
awwh, thank you! :blush: :heart:
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:iconlady-yume:
Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013   Writer
Dee-love, a belated congrats on that well-deserved DD! I can't believe I didn't know this one yet - it's absolutely gorgeous! :heart: :clap:
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014   General Artist

kimmy-love! :tighthug:

i only recently found out that this had received a dd myself, i am both ecstatic and humbled. :love:

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:iconlady-yume:
Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014   Writer
Dee-chan~! :heart:
So wonderful to see your pretty face around here again - and yes, be so happy about that DD! You so deserved it :heart:
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i-am-a-bridgewalker Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh wow--this is so beautiful. the language throughout is so soft and soothing and friendly. a lovely tribute.

snake-eyed yet shotgun-hearted-  was one of my favorite lines.
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014   General Artist
thank you so much for the lovely compliment, loveliest dear. :huggle: <3
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:iconkarinta:
Karinta Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student General Artist
And I also love the sentiment expressed! It's so sweet and gentle, but cryptic. :D


:glomp:
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014   General Artist
i'm thrilled you enjoyed the read, kind creature! :huggle: <3
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:iconkarinta:
Karinta Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student General Artist
:hug: No problem, sweetie! :lol:
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:iconkarinta:
Karinta Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student General Artist
I love the alliteration in stanza 4 : Lighthouse/lover, grow/gills/grey, friends/phenomena.
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:iconssensory:
ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013   Writer
Congratulations on the well-deserved DD! :tigthhug:
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014   General Artist

shane darling! i've been gone for like ever but yeah, thank you so much! :glomp:


how you been? i've missed you and writing terribly so and can't wait to delve into your gallery soonest! :heart:

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:iconssensory:
ssensory Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014   Writer
ahhh, dee! i missed you. :tighthug: you are more than welcome! :la: 

i've been great for the most part! i hope you've been doing well...how about you? :)
aww, you're so sweet! :love: i've missed your writing as well. :heart::heart::heart:
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:icontalontali:
TalonTali Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
This is absolutely gorgeous.
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014   General Artist
i'm really glad you enjoyed the read! thanks muchly, lovely soul! :heart:
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:icontalontali:
TalonTali Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
You're very welcome.
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:iconskrayle:
Skrayle Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Student General Artist
This is really wonderful! I love the way you write~
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   General Artist
awwh! thank you so much for the loveliest of compliments, kind soul. :huggle:
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:iconjade-pandora:
jade-pandora Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013

:heart::iconweeeplz::heart:

Eeeeee congratulations on your wonderful poem, lovely Deeeee dee deedle-dee doo!



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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   General Artist
Spazattackplz  :iconbeatingheartplz:!!
Thank you ever so much, jade darling!! :tighthug: :heart:
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013   Writer
:heart:! Congratulations on the DD, wonderful. Love you oodles.
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   General Artist
:heart: :heart: :heart:!!
thank you for being the inspiration and it goes without saying i love you oodles and some. :tighthug:
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Writer
:love: :smooch:

Awww. :tighthug: Love you infinity oodles. <3
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014   General Artist
:iconloveyou4everplz:
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014   Writer
:iconpokehugplz:
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:iconsciencevsart:
sciencevsart Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
There is not a line that does not pull out strings of memory or wash the eye with stunning visuals and surreal love. I can feel the words warm behind the ears.

Beautiful.
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   General Artist
awwh, shucks! :blush:
thank you endlessly for such a heartwarming comment, kind soul! :tighthug:
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:iconpomohippie7:
pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013   Writer
Congratulations on your DD, dear! :hug:
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   General Artist
thank you so much, darling lady! :huggle: <3
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:iconpomohippie7:
pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Writer
You're very welcome, dearest! It was well deserved! :huggle:
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014   General Artist
you're truly a sweetheart of a human being! <3 <3 <3
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:iconpomohippie7:
pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014   Writer
Oh, you. :blushes:  Thank you. :huggle:
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:iconforestmeetwildfire:
forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Congrats on the DD! :hug: So well deserved, this is a beautiful work of art :heart:
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   General Artist
i've been gone for like forever and i just saw this! :love:
i can't believe it, a DD! thank you dearly, darling julie! :huggle:
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:iconforestmeetwildfire:
forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
you're very welcome, and glad to see that you're back! :tighthug:
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014   General Artist
as i am glad to be back, dearling! :tighthug: :heart:
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :heart:
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   General Artist
i've been gone for like forever and i just saw this! :love:
eep! a DD! thank you so much dearling! :huggle:
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure, enjoy it! :heart:
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014   General Artist
:heart: :heart: :heart:
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:iconnathair77:
Nathair77 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
This is amazing, thank you so much
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   General Artist
no dear soul, thank you for the amazing compliment! :glomp: :heart:
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013   Writer
I'm going to unfavorite then re-favorite it because I can. Ugh. I love you. ♥
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013   General Artist
meeep :heart:
i love you too, so very much so, 
which i'm sure taht you already know 
but heck, even so, la la la la. :tighthug:
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