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Literature Text
scribbling down vicious verses on
tissue napkins while seated at
the corner of a sidewalk cafe is
about as romantic, raw and
honest a p(o)et
-outside of the four corners of your bedpost-
can get
if you've got that person dreading over
drafts and dreams on end
-of you, for you-
consider yourself a new owner
it is now time to
tame this p(o)et's perverse mane
you've got your hands on
a fragile purebred
which can be very tricky for
first timers
tissue napkins while seated at
the corner of a sidewalk cafe is
about as romantic, raw and
honest a p(o)et
-outside of the four corners of your bedpost-
can get
if you've got that person dreading over
drafts and dreams on end
-of you, for you-
consider yourself a new owner
it is now time to
tame this p(o)et's perverse mane
you've got your hands on
a fragile purebred
which can be very tricky for
first timers
Literature
settle
on these nights
i seemed to bleed
something beautiful
atop of blue bird's
bones.
breathing
breaths
of
frost
lashes.
stars settling
in
eyes of spring,
budding blooms
and
sure-shell things
but heart cries
for blossoms
the fall of gentle
white
rough my bones
in winter's chill-
where my
heart
used to be
so
s t i l l
.
.
.
Literature
I Only Care About Your Happiness
There was a problem last night,
with the shaking yellow crystals
through which your garage light was
refracted in a dozen amber waves,
where the broken folding chair
took its kingdom with the smoke
and left me or you to the floor,
in the angle of my tendons
shaded by the jagged tension
in your absent tooth-smile,
brought upon while I
brushed your knee
accidentally,
when your phone struck
concrete.
Literature
Wordsmiths
How long did you think
we could pound our vocabulary with hammers
before it fell flat?
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Read by the ever amazing *disrhythmic over HERE: [link]
I WOULD SUPER LOVE TO SEE COMMENTS, THANK YOU!!
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Is the poem's length acceptable enough?
What do you think of the flow?
Favorite line?
Additional comments
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The last line breaks the basic flow excellently, and makes int unique! Congrats.